Global Peer Review-Technology Essay:
Framing Statement:
For this assignment, we were asked to write about the effects of technology. We were to make global reviews for our peers. In my opinion, both of my peers had great essays. For Sydney’s essay, I had made a lot of idea comments. However, with Carissa’s essay I had made more evidence comments. personally, I think this workshop was helpful. The workshop will not only allow me to be able to revise and write a better essay, but also to critique my own writing in the future.
Global Peer Review- Happiness Essay:
