In class, we were to write an essay on happiness based on what we have learn from different authors and our perspective on the matter. Personally, English has never been my best subject, which also indicates that I’m not a very strong writer. My essay had a lot information from the authors, but there was not enough on my opinion. I am not quite sure as to why I did not have any of my thoughts in my essay, but it will sure be added in the final draft. Although, my first draft was “okay”, I think the revisions that I have made were good. This is because of the help of my classmates input on what should be revised throughout my essay. By the time the final draft is due, I am confident that my essay will be much better than the first.