Based on the comments I have received for my first essay, I think that I have plenty of room to improve with this next essay. The first essay did not have a clear thesis and did explain my purpose for the essay. For the second essay I want to be able to make the thesis clear and state my purpose. I also want to make sure that my transitions are better than before. Overall, I did do as well as I thought I did, but I will make sure to improve with my writing based on my feedback from the first essay.